That's a beautiful story! I agree with Kqbuckley, this story could be animated very simply, which would go nicely with your animation style, if you wanted. Even if you don't animate it, this is still a gorgeous story!
Yeah you're right! I was kinda going for an old school video game style, animating and putting some sound effects over will probablt improve that feel! I may look into it in the future! Thank you for your nice comment!